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Lovers are they
She and He
But destined to be apart

Across the miles
Yearning hearts

A voice on the line
Distant as it my be
Seduces her delicate ear

Tears fall from her sad brown eyes
And He so wishes to be that tear
Just so he could caress her face
And taste her lips

Each letter treasured
Every word savoured
Imagining all the possibilites

Lovers are they
She and He
But destined to be apart
©2006-2010 ~brat07
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the agony of love across the miles

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:icon99thbone:
destined -- but never forgotten -- for these words will travel -- and the true power lies in the understanding -- and the power to use imagination to create the feelings -- beautiful words -- later days

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-- of all the things i lost, i miss my mind the most --
-- let your mind create, what your imagination desires --
:iconbrat07:
thx for the comment and different view

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:
:iconadorabell:
Wow Ani! That's...*sheds a tear* simply beautiful.

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:absolut: The best things in life aren't free :beer:
:iconbrat07:
:bow: thank you belle. i try with all my pixieness

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:
:iconsammael-quigley:
cute i like it
you have pixieness?!?!?!?!?

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Sammael
:iconbrat07:
ty. what did you say?

:giggle: okay, i see you read the comment i made to belle

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:
:iconfjollemis:
Very touching poem, I am really impressed and it does take a lot to impress me with poetry. So well done.

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Be a child forever more...
:icondansterthehusky:
normaly i dont read poetry but that was amazing keep up the good work

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Deviantarts only black and white husky

DaNsTeRtHeHuSkY

Love my angel Rachy
:iconbrat07:
baie dankie. that's very kind of you

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:
:iconbrat07:
why thank you little husky :hug:

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:

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